i have a friend...her name was ivy...she was my good friend...i've known her since i'm 13 years old...it's been almost 7 years we become friend...i'm very appreciate this this friend because she always support me and help me whenever i have any problems...i'm kinda miss her...i miss the moment that i've spent with her...there was a lot memories between me and her...sad...sweet...bitter...sour...these few years,she had been through a lot of problems...she was so sad about it...tat time,i'm so sad seeing my friend sad... i don't know why they wanna make this little girl sad...as a friend of her,i just can support her in her back...ivy,i know u had been through a lot of tough things in ur life,but u have to be strong...don't let these unhappy things control u...u deserve e to have a better life...Live for something. Do good, and leave behind you a monument of virtue that the storm of time can never destroy.Write your name in kindness, love, and mercy, on the hearts of thousands you come in contact with year by year; you will never be forgotten.No, your name, your deeds, will be as legible on the hearts you leave behind as the stars on the brow of evening. Good deeds will shine as the stars of heaven.
i would say....A+ for your writing.kkekekke..hahah content will be 8/10, language will be 8/10 and style of writing will be 3/5..hahahhaha
ReplyDeletewaaa.....sounds so worst...huhuhuu
ReplyDeletelol= =" she was my good fren?~~ isnt tat should be is? : she is a good fren of mine.
ReplyDeletesounds better =p
was feel like she isnt here anymore ady = =" haha
BTW nice writing skill u hav. keep it up =p
im a english teacher among my fren la= = hahahasssS